After being reprimanded for my lack of punctuation......c/c?

Punctuation in poetry is such a controversy. e.e. mings was one to not only not use punctuation but also signed his name in lower case letters, would your critics argue with e.e? Being unconventional is part of being artistic. I understood every word of this wonderful and refreshing poem and smiled all the way through. Besides most of your poetry leaves me breathless even with pause!